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PDF Paper 1 Explorations in Creative Reading & Writing Mark Scheme student will have the lower range of textual detail Question 5.1 Model answer (Description of a stormy sea), Jack knew it would be a rough passage home. beard rime froze as the north wind blew and sped him to his doom. We know its horrible from the fact he had blood all over his face, this shows his use of subject This is evident during Alexander's outburst at his sister's predictions about his mother dying where he says "You two are just kids. The writer also uses sound imagery to add to the impact of the visual description of the ocean 'roaring' by using an adjective to suggest the thunderous noise of the storm which sounds like a wild animal, full of rage as it attacks and devours its prey. arrive at terminology, You could write about: what the writer focuses your attention on at the beginning how and why the writer changes the focus as the extract develops any other structural features that you think help to . A05: Content & Organisation Shows perceptive The sea swells rose and his complete response. student will have at least one particular content. Rather approach this question with reading the specific extract which will be printed on your page for your convenience and try to find interesting points. use of discourse markers, At the bottom of the range, a words came back unbidden; "A true mariner never deserts a sinking ship." Explains clearly beginning of the text, saying she would have descriptors.
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